Monday, July 25, 2005

Chavi.

Seen her-learnt her; Awed her-mocked her;
Followed her-Cursed her; Borne her-killed her;
Shouldered her-Damned her; Made her-broke her;
Revered her-Mothered her; Loved her-abhorred her.
Seen her-Been her;
She is nature, no more-no less;


Agni - her identity!

Seen,

Fury- her trusted weapon wringing the neck of those selfish serpents that attempt to poison her fervent dreams.

Anger- the volcano setting ablaze her grit to fight the illogical protocols of the society that scribble filth on the colorful sketches of her aspirations.

Angst- an unrest infuriating the inner calm to sail her through the crippled situations that she seeks to rebel against, but gives up on, during moments of weariness.

Arrogance-the mask she has meticulously fabricated to scare away the ugly that take advantage of humility that defines her.

A Silent wail, a single teardrop that floods her noisy heart filling the pores that smile seldom fails to fill.

Recalcitrant, she is not. You made her thus.


Salil-her identity.

Like,
A rippling stream- a silent knowledge of her banal self and a realization of the heights she seeks to conquer.

The roaring flood- a rebellion born somewhere, a point from where she sees no return, vehemence that frenzies her mind to transcend all standards.

A nostalgic drizzle- the coquettish warmth that effeminates her soul and enfold tranquility every single moment;in her life and others.

The passionate rain- a gift of sensuality and wild that maddens her man on those together nights.

A singular stream- an arduous path that the search of knowledge drives her to traverse; giving life and energy to those fellow travelers.

An ocean of emotions-that exhilarate the feeling of being; and daze her, as she sees everything in the nothingness of self & others.


Pawan-her identity.

Forming,

A musical zephyr- flirting with their ruffled hair, humming a favorite melody ,giving divine solace when her kin is in obnoxious pain.

A violent sandstorm-blinding the eyes, numbing their conviction, betraying her own goodness when in war with the foe, the contorted.

A magical breeze- married to moist in the air, a tender petal with a silken touch calming the muffled tears of her loved one.


Aakash –her identity.

In the,

Vastness- accommodating the sunshine & dusk; the blues, white& oranges; the crescent and the growing.

Adorable Grace- an amazing poise and level headedness that she exhibits when confronted with the muddling puzzles of life.

In her grandeur-the mesmerizing splendor and pride she displays as she nurtures a life; fostering her own unquenchable thirst for learning and living in her child.

Ela-her identity.

Displaying,

Forbearance illimitable- loving the deformed &offensive, the insulting &cynical, the hideous and unsightly;

Patience galore - at times a resignation when it is impossible, and others perseverance to break all barriers & may be a wait for eternity; to have her way.

A shocking tolerance –for heart wrenching sorrow, of devastating failures, of broken relationships, of betrayal and ‘games’ played.

A reverence- a silent respect and recognition of talent & turmoil, for humble & the egotist, of affection & compromises, for the old-fashioned & rebel.
Of their goals and hers,
Of their existence and hers.

Seen her-Been her!!
She is nature,No less-all the more.


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(Chavi- Faces, of womanhood!! Agni - Fire, Salil - Water, Pawan- air, Aakash - Sky, Ela- Earth)

This piece is dedicated to those 3 women, who have shaped my life :)

13 comments:

musafir said...

Epical - nothing more, nothing less!

You delve into a bottomless mine of emotion and you come out every time with something that is richer than the last one -- mindblowing in the way it offers an insight into the female psyche.

So many facets...wonderfully woven.

scorpigle said...

For the first time I read "sky" being associated with feminine qualities.. interesting...

catch 22 said...

Spellbound! I read it five times and trust me each time it was a novel experience. Keep it going. Kudos Miss. Samudraa

Anonymous said...

brilliant.

Sreekesh Menon said...

a mixed battery of emotions, tangled and tied, into this bow ribbon.As I read, I am transported into depths beyond my reach where I stumble upon this torn page from a secret book: build your perfect woman.

Praveen said...

The part I liked the best
"A musical zephyr- flirting with their ruffled hair, humming a favorite melody ,giving divine solace when her kin is in obnoxious pain" written about air.

Wonderful post!

livinghigh said...

multiple personalities? hehehe... coincidence dat my latest one is something of de same, on Gabbles.blogspot.

gulnaz said...

brilliant and novel!!

agree with musafir, epical too!

hope and love said...

OMG !! you r very talented..!
:))
txs for visiting my blog..

Sindhuja Parthasarathy said...

Musafir..> epical is too much of a word to use,am humbled!

Scorpigle..>i thought writers (and others) have looked at all nature as female?

living high........>read ur post there,liked it :)

sreekesh.....>thats wot i was dng taking bits and parts from all woman who've inspired me and sculpted the "perfect" one!

Thanks Praveen,catch22,h&L

Gul.......>honored!Simply Loved ur new post,amazing one that!

. : A : . said...

I like the way you have woven in and out through each facet in this piece. Well written!

Anonymous said...

mindblowing and awe inspiring to say the least. I am truly fortunate to know the beautiful mind behind this striking piece of soul searching verse...

Sindhuja Parthasarathy said...

shal,iam happy u read this and liked it too :) and iam fortuate too,to have u as a muse for this piece......

thanks A :)