Knock, Knock!
(For you Chickoo)
Your memories,
lie unattended.
Mine, now pregnant;
With demanding triplets.
Your anger,
Calls itself indifference.
Mine, now zealous,
Grows, in cancerous rage.
Your love now,
Has an adorable new face.
Mine, now ashamed,
Hiding behind immature age-old platitudes.
Your words now,
Consistently fail me.
Mine, now clichéd,
Having lost the inspiration of our togetherness.
Wednesday, October 08, 2008
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4 comments:
after a long time visiting your space..
u still do deliver good writings..!!
oh yes Vinay, thanks :)
But should i not be getting better with time? :)
Hi,
I am a great fan of ur writing...just luv the way u play with words and portray things so simply..as though it didnt take an effort to write :) have been visiting ur space since 2006 and each time it is just a pleasure reading what u have written...can maybe relate to ur writings...pls keep up the good word and do spin out more pieces for the sheer reading pleasure of people like me....sorry if i am intruding ur private space by commenting..
Sudha
TSudha,i wonder if you are kedar's friend.And thanks for your generous words :)
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