It’s all over!
(For you- Life)
I started off with vigor; climbed tall mountains – won many wars, conquered many kingdoms, married many wins.
But now it all seems so futile. I have just gone round and round, winning and failing. Getting and losing. I have none with me. None that makes it all worth it.
I owe an apology,
To my life, for I now quit to fight;
To death, for I have no courage to embrace you.
To those dreams that I now forfeit;
To the million plans that will never materialize.
To those people, that I now have to let go.
To those relationships that have become meaningless.
To my undying spirit, that will not know dawn again.
To my romance, that has succumbed to my wretched failure.
To life, for I have no energy to fight.
To death, I have no reason to fight.
To hope, for I have no one to hope for.
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And what’s the point of a blog when all is over.
The end!
Tuesday, June 19, 2007
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11 comments:
The mood is getting more n more Melancholious... looks like someone needs to do some serious cheering up!
Although I must say its beautifully written and a pleasure to read.....HOpe to see a lighter and brighter post next time :)....And hope the end of this post doesn't mean the end of the blog :) Take care!
I agree with Isis! Overdose of melancholy....
All I can say is knowing you as the bounciest person on earth, there will be a complete opposite (in poetic terms) of this poem, say next Wednesday! So while the poem itself is crisp, I don't believe what you say :D
-you know who i am
I know niether isis nor "u-know-who-iam". :(
But well,as far as teh "complete opposite" is concerned i will have to tell u after 5pm today when my appraial will get done :)
On a serious note,i need a break.A long exciting one by the beach side;in some far away land.
Its time you woke up to face reality. Maybe you should simply accept the poem as it is.
P.S. I can only admire the sense of humour people at Google possess: the end of your post reads 'fabricated by samudraa..'
lol Sathya,that was quite rude.But i will let that be since i did invite "judgments" with that writing.
what do u mean i accept the poem as reality?I wrote it,so it was real at that moment.If u dont' take it as fiction that is.
And i put that "fabrication" thing,not google;
Nice way of writing ur momentary emotional state... I liked it. But whats the big deal with one appraisal?? Why shud such a small thing arouse such strong emotions?? Life is way beyond that...
hey princesssin....howz life?
hey rafiki,that 'appraisal thing' was a joke :)this is somethign entirely different.And it is fictitious to a gr8 extent.
heeeeeeeeey mottai,long time.IAm doing great. :) hows u,call me sometieme.
wah kya kamaal ki post hai..death bows before your poetry...
Wow! Momentary apologies are beyond my realm of thought!
In any case my apologies if I sounded rude.
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