Adhi.
Trying to steer clear of this sudden eccentric chaos;
Hoping this monstrous transition will
become an angelic blessing!
Assuming these cluttered words in my mind web,
Will evolve into meaningful abstractness!
Soon;
Hoping future will,
better the past;
And the past,
will teach me lessons!
Hoping the insanity i sense in the empty words now;
Is the dark before a new lustrous dawn!
Hoping letters to grow wings,
For stories to become flight.
Pushing myself out of the window,
Looking far into the future;
For a new beginning!
Yet another;
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(Adhi - A Beginning)
Thursday, September 22, 2005
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'Hoping letters to grow wings.. ' liked that..
And yes, hope is eternal and in a way to hope is to live, right..
a very short post for a change, eh?
Yes, this one is shorter than before but it packs the same punch!
:-)
i am lovin ur words. very beotiful. keep up good works.
prasad
punch? more like a kick from someone's intellectual backside.
Punchoo
But pushing yourself out the window does sound drastic. You don't live in a high-rise I hope?
Try writing one simple sentence.
just tried to say iam "suffering" a 'block' :)
thanks A& Prasad :)
Anononymous.....yet another!
wud luv to live in a 'high' rise.
oh Mr.Anonymous..iam tired,give me a break!these lines are simple enough.
I love this, its extremely colorful, I can visualize it.
a begining, a new truth,
surrounded by suprises,
rising above each,
one after the other.
a begining, a new face,
surrounded by smiles,
brighter than the other,
one after the other.
a begining, a new meaning,
surrounded by questions,
needing only one answer,
one after the other.
What can I say???
Absolutely fabulous!!!
hello :)
"Hoping letters to grow wings,
For stories to become flight" wonderful thoughts
Why no new posts, Solomon Island Companion? :P
Eating poetry,silverine,praveen ----> thanks :)
SRee-that one was good..exactly wot iam going thru!!
Boss....where have u been?
Shreyas->
"Hoping letters to grow wings,
For stories to become flight"
Words are just not there,creativity seems non-existant,and stories-what are these things? :(( "kann vechitta"
Brilliant poem yet again Samudraa...
Keshi.
that was wat came out of a "block" ?
go girl :)
i want to write like you. it flows like beautiful water. i am a fan of your lovely works.
mahalakshmi
Happy Deepavali Samudraa :-)
compact and packs a neat punch, well delivered. very good but you dont need me to tell you that.
You seem to have disappeared, whare are you, samudraa?
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